Advantages of Watching Televison
Nowadays, television is the most popular media of human modern life. Every house has at least one TV inside. TV has being played a role in everyone's daily life since it was invented in 1940s. Although more and more people think that TV just brings disadvantages to them, especially to children, it also has three main advantages. By watching TV, people can know everything happening around them, can learn different languages, and can also relax their minds.
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It's similar to the paragraph on page 151. However it needs to fix some of its part. In 3rd sentence, you should better change "our daily life". I think we are not supposed to use 'our'. Also it has clear thesis. Good job!! ^^
"a role" in 3rd sentence is need any adjective as necessary, or important
That is good.you are a little bit smart.BAICHI
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